Stay Safe in Baghdad

Pablina on Oct 18, 2009

Tags: Baghdad, iraq, Middle East

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I ask you when.

I am asking you when

Will I see you again

Its going to be sad

Stay safe in Baghdad

Image by The U.S. Army via Flickr

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Comments (6)

cardy on Oct 18, 2009
A good write, that is the question we ask ourselves and when will it be answered nice work from you!
ken bultman on Oct 18, 2009
That was quite nice.
revivor on Oct 22, 2009
stopped all of a sudden!?
I thought there would be more – but when I read it again it worked pretty well
Debra. on Dec 8, 2009
Very sweet and touching!
xoxo on Dec 8, 2009
Very nice. Thought provoking. Thank you Debbie for sharing this. Good poem, pablina.

Mae
Faith Hodge on Dec 8, 2009
Straight to the point. Very serious. I pray too.

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