What we do to keep our lover near.

You wondered what new blunder I could muster that could possibly render you aghast and asunder?

Stay tuned I will let you know

You question what of any of the many lessons could like a meal be fed into your head for quick digestion?

Stay close and I will let you know

The years of slip and falls into the arms of one another, shielding the other from the storm and the thunder

When outside it was freezing cold

So

Now you presume I would disclose what just may loom behind the roses, sweet talk and perfume?

If I told you I fear you would go

So stay tuned; I will let you know….eventually

©2010  J. K. Bradford

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  • Adrn0919 on Oct 11, 2010

    Soooo….what did you do? I know, you will tell us eventually. Great poem.

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Oct 12, 2010

    Pure unadulterated fiction. However I am glad you enjoyed it.

  • Jewelstar on Oct 12, 2010

    I’m curious to know?? Don’t make us toooo impatient!

  • ashan1614 on Oct 12, 2010

    Love is precious and we all do what we can to make sure we can hold onto it. Nice work!

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Oct 12, 2010

    This is pure fiction however Ashan is right we will often go to extremes to keep our love near. The sad part is, we often do the wrong thing to try and make that happen.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Oct 12, 2010

    what imagery
    what poetry
    what addiction
    tis

    and i love the music
    and now i know
    why you read me

    as you still have yet to fathom
    the extent of your creation
    how much of it is imagination
    and how much will it need
    for reproduction
    in terms of love
    and reality
    tis only my comprehsion
    and notion
    of your creation
    of poetry
    picture and music
    all combined as one
    wonderful
    i can’t hear
    but i heard you.
    twas lovely
    that’s all i can now say
    for you

    lhlhlh

    GR88888888888888888 IN CAPITALS

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Oct 12, 2010

    Thanks LH!

  • Poetic Enigma on Oct 14, 2010

    This is a great poem, very well composed and expressed.

    thank you for sharing

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Oct 14, 2010

    Thanks Enigma!

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