Stealthily She Came

chitragopi on Oct 29, 2009

She came and left her telltale signs.

Image via Wikipedia

Soft and smooth did she tread at night,

Svelte and supple, she stepped so light.

Slight, silky, shimmer was her gown,

Stealthily caressing the cobbles down.

A whisper, a lisper, her voice so husky,

Morning come, bright bloomed the muskie.

Green grass greener, birds added twitter,

Garden trees, bushes and blooms a-glitter.

Singular perfume, the sign she’d come,

She, - none else than first drizzle of monsoon.

10
Liked it

Comments (13)

Sourav on Oct 29, 2009
Very well written. Nicely constructed and composed.
Goodselfme on Oct 29, 2009
This portrait with your words has such vivid imagery along with a zing at the end.So well expressed.
larry84 on Oct 29, 2009
great write
ken bultman on Oct 29, 2009
So well written I can close my eyes and visualize it.
willie wondka on Oct 29, 2009
loved your garden in your picture and the poem was good also.
Guy Hogan on Oct 29, 2009
As a young man I went through a monsoon. It was a long time ago and I was a diferent person.
Vikram Chhabra on Oct 29, 2009
I always loved the monsoon. There was something poetic when it first came….
Ruby Hawk on Oct 29, 2009
Well done, beautiful garden.
wonder on Oct 29, 2009
So refreshing, no words.
Remmyramesh on Oct 31, 2009
Nature’s praise!! Exo piece!!
Nydia Esther on Nov 4, 2009
What an amazing piece! Love it!
Hansika on Nov 5, 2009
awesome……..
diamondpoet on Nov 6, 2009
That was really beautiful, thank you for sharing,

Hi there!