A poem.

A colorful lie was all it took

Out of your mouth with an honest look

Before that time,

I seemed to be hooked.

I couldn’t leave.

You are a crook.

You stole my heart,

And spit in its face

You took the trust

It can’t be replaced

No more sleepless nights,

With you at your place

I let you go so far away.

You asked me please and begged to stay

Guess what buddy

I’m moving far away

You’ll never find me

Not at your best

So don’t even bother

You’ll just get stressed.

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Comments (6)
  • Atanacio on Sep 21, 2009

    you are on a great theme here :)

  • Will Dee on Sep 22, 2009

    I love the flow and mesage of this poem.

  • giftarist on Sep 22, 2009

    I like this one!

  • Jane Jane on Sep 22, 2009

    like it and so true. once trust is broken it’s not gonna be the same way as before.

  • Starpisces on Sep 22, 2009

    Like this too..

  • Sourav on Oct 6, 2009

    Very free flowing poem. liked it!

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