Steps with Love

carissimi on Oct 17, 2010

Tags: carissim, compass, heart, love, Path, steps, wherever

One step, two step.

steps with love

one step, two step,

three step, and four,

smooth path or

boulders on the floor

steps with love

will help me walk

to a path of whatever

and what should be

for love brings love

there are many types

of love and walking

with steps with love

with my heart as

a compass

wherever these

steps may take me

wherever they maybe

steps will love

will guide me

and transport me

to wherever i should be

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Eunice Tan on Oct 17, 2010
Well said.
awesome11 on Oct 17, 2010
great share! thanks!
thresiapaulose on Oct 18, 2010
a loving poem from a most loving!(carissimi)
rhaka22 on Oct 18, 2010
nice share,I like it..
Brewed Coffee on Oct 18, 2010
With the heart as the compass…i love that line….
Christine Ramsay on Oct 18, 2010
You describe the process of falling in love so well.

Christine
Starpisces on Oct 18, 2010
another good poem, friend.

To add on, as fingers itched :

one step, two step, three step, four step
slowly but eventually, happiness you will get.
Guy Hogan on Oct 18, 2010
The process of falling in love can be a happy and frightening time, but mainly a happy time.
giftarist on Oct 18, 2010
Very well penned piece.
Shamarie Knight on Oct 18, 2010
Great job!
1hopefulman on Oct 19, 2010
Interesting and unusual poem.
Francois Hagnere on Oct 20, 2010
Lovely, being in love gives us wings…Bravo. And thank you.
Sharif Ishnin on Oct 20, 2010
Positive and very optimistic way to view life.Well done.
Goodselfme on Oct 20, 2010
Filled with hope and trust, you selected the great words to express yourself here. Thank you.
Sceptical Thinker on Oct 20, 2010
Thank you for the poem, it is so difficult to express feelings in words. Something as ephemeral as love I feel is the most difficult I suppose because we all feel vulnerable. Lovely read
Dreamescape on Oct 20, 2010
great write
BC Doan on Oct 23, 2010
Nice poem with hopeful love!
Phoenix Montoya on Oct 23, 2010
Great lines. Very heart felt. Thanks!
Likha on Oct 24, 2010
I’m glad I took a step to this poem. Lovely one.
crisdiwata on Oct 26, 2010
A very nice piece for love. Thanks
Raj the Tora on Oct 26, 2010
nice poem
srbasu on Oct 28, 2010
Very nice Information, Thanks for Sharing.
nativewolf on Oct 29, 2010
Nice share. Very good.
sandcastle on Oct 29, 2010
nice poem!
yes me on Oct 30, 2010
A nice share here too cheers
Dee Gold on Oct 31, 2010
let us step for love,wonderful piece
Brewed Coffee on Nov 3, 2010
Sharif Ishnin on Nov 7, 2010
Revisited this poem. I enjoyed reading this one again.
lucia anna on Dec 18, 2010
Excellent

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