A young girl is searching for her lover.

You still want to know me
But you don’t seem to tell me why
Is it love?
If so of what kind
You are a young angel
I am blind
Not to be able to see
Your inner beauty
Which are miles out?
From your mind’s horizon
What will you do?
If you learnt some day
I was not the one
You were looking out for anyway.
Should you hear
 That I have gone for ever,
Will you then shed a tear?
If so for how long

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Comments (9)
  • cardy on Oct 18, 2009

    I hope he see her in time before she gives up a lovely as always.

  • Sourav on Oct 18, 2009

    Very emotional write…

  • Petalm on Oct 18, 2009

    Good writing.

  • ceegirl on Oct 18, 2009

    good write

  • cebuanaeyez on Oct 18, 2009

    beautiful work

  • Frances Lawrence on Oct 18, 2009

    That is very sad.

  • Shirley Shuler on Oct 18, 2009

    Sad but a beautiful write.

  • Gudu on Oct 19, 2009

    awesome

  • CutestPrincess on Nov 10, 2009

    very emotional piece…

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