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Still in Pajamas

MrZen on Mar 30, 2008
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Sometimes less is more, so you can fill in rest with your own imagination.

Sunlight through the letterbox
On a Saturday
In June.
“I’ve been up for hours!
Why are you still wearing your pyjamas?”

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  • CYFilmStudent on Mar 30, 2008

    I love this poem. :) good job

  • Alexa Gates on Mar 30, 2008

    cute!

  • KathySpring on Mar 31, 2008

    short and cut
    KathySpring

  • Meri Jeffrey on Apr 3, 2008

    Do you not yet know!

  • Myron Lysenko on Apr 4, 2008

    Aha! I love evocative, open-ended poems! And i love to sleep in on Saturday mornings.

    Good one!

    Cheers,
    Myron.

    PS Have you thought about changing the title? You could put a little clue in it?

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