Just another one of my poems.

What have you done?


A shadow of chaos as emotions vanish.


Once we experienced paradise,


Innocent and glad-hearted,


But your heart died.

A sickening fever of memory -


Emotions follow blood, follow darkness,


Love burnt to ashes.


In a haze of hatred,


I hate you.

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  • Rosettaartist1 on Jul 26, 2011

    another good one

  • Bambang Setiarso on Jul 27, 2011

    nice post and I like your poem………where is come from your poem ? how to get the ideas so that you write on poem. best regards

  • aroosamorose on Jul 27, 2011

    Very emotional.Nice poem keep up a good work.

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