Romantic memories of times past.
My entry for the “feather and velvet glove” writer’s challenge.

Aging treasures covered in dust.
Keepsakes of lives now past.
Long lost memories of secrets untold.
Pages of lives, my hand does hold.

Faded letters, tied with a string,
A feather lost from a bluebird’s wing.
A velvet glove and a broken clock,
an assortment of pieces thrown in a box.

What meaning was there in days of old?
To whom did these of stories hold?
Dearest and sweetheart, the letters say,
But of family or kin I cannot assay.

Mysteries hidden from my eyes.
Questions without answers now arise.
Romantic visions of ancient love,
As I hold in my hand– that velvet glove.

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  • Melody SJAL on Jun 2, 2009

    Love the way you have woven the words. Perfect!

  • swatilohani on Jun 2, 2009

    well stated

  • Deep Blue on Jun 2, 2009

    You have an edge to the challenge.Very meaningful lines.

  • Pinaki Ghosh on Jun 2, 2009

    Great work.

  • Fegger on Jun 2, 2009

    Very nice!

  • Darla Cooke on Jun 2, 2009

    Beautifully written!

  • QuinMonty86 on Jun 2, 2009

    Lovely poem, and loved the mystery of the past :)

  • richard reed on Jun 2, 2009

    I loved this piece! you always keep my interest with your great writes..thank you for the share my friend..stay blessed..your fan.Rich

  • George W Whitehead on Jun 2, 2009

    Lovely poem, Katie.

  • Mr Ghaz on Jun 2, 2009

    Wonderful post!!..That was lovely poem and well presented story..nice words too..I really liked it..Well done and keep it up..thanks for sharing this excellent work.

  • hzleyes on Jun 2, 2009

    I absolutely love this one; it’s a great entry for the writer’s challenge!

  • Kate Smedley on Jun 3, 2009

    Very lovely poem, brilliant response to the challenge!

  • Casey Mack on Jun 3, 2009

    I like this from several directions. It tells an interesting story well, and in a very pleasing form. The couplets work well, and the piece has a nice singsong rhythm in reading aloud. And, I love the imagery, it gives the piece a real “show it don’t tell it” integrity.

    Excellent work, my friend.

  • Princess Dre on Jun 3, 2009

    I like it alot – I am a sucker for history and I think it is so neat to find things from other eras- a story is told just with it presence- nice write – God Bless- Princess

  • swatilohani on Jun 4, 2009

    apt

  • Duff D Moss on Jun 4, 2009

    Oh Dude – that was fantastic! Great response to the challenge. Thanks for playing. Hope you have a go in the next round too.

  • Janet65 on Jun 5, 2009

    Hi Katie, What a lovely poem. I write a lot of poetry also, and enjoy reading it. I like the rhyme that seems to work its way into the right spots. The rhythm is also excellent. It flows so well. Keep writing.
    Thanks for sharing,
    Janet

  • ken bultman on Jun 10, 2009

    A job very well done and from a fun place to explore.

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