A midnight thunderstorm haiku.

                    

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Dark clouds cruise the night.

Thunder dances with delight.

Life giving raindrops.

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  • Kate Smedley on Jun 30, 2009

    Another beautiful haiku, very descriptive.

  • ken bultman on Jun 30, 2009

    Excellent piece of work. More.

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Jun 30, 2009

    Oh, nice one! I felt like this when we got our lovely rain two days ago. Now it is hot again.

  • Melody SJAL on Jun 30, 2009

    As stunning in beauty as the picture itself.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 30, 2009

    pam, that’s a nice one.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jul 5, 2009

    Beautiful haiku. It’s can be imagined how destructive the thunderous days that could bring. Liked it.

  • Nicholas Kenney on Aug 8, 2009

    I still don’t understand these but it’s short and sweet!

  • Milton H Peebles III on Aug 23, 2009

    nice

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