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Stormy Seas

Goodselfme on Nov 17, 2009
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It is said with proper imagery given by a poet that they have done well. Can you see the storm here?

Pounding waves fight back the pushing wind

Nowhere near the shore.

Howling noises round about my head

Silence is abated evermore.

White caps  too many to count

and too far out

Busy seas caress the evening star

to quiet the stormy shout.

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  • Poetic Enigma on Nov 17, 2009

    I see it, great poem…
    Very well composed

  • Glynis Smy on Nov 17, 2009

    Painted a picture for me!

  • Joie Schmidt on Nov 17, 2009

    Very good work*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • deep blue on Nov 17, 2009

    Great worded imagery. I could almost feel the cold strong winds blowing.

  • papaleng on Nov 17, 2009

    Outstanding work and Yes I see the storm coming..

  • giftarist on Nov 17, 2009

    Yes, I saw it and I sensed.

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 17, 2009

    I can certainly see the storm through your words. So well done.

    Christine

  • Hansika on Nov 17, 2009

    nice one..thanks for the share

  • ken bultman on Nov 17, 2009

    I saw…I heard.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Nov 17, 2009

    I can imagine and see the storm here..it’s swirling…well description.

  • ashan1614 on Nov 17, 2009

    Imagery is everything in poems (well, that and the emotion tied to them). Well done!

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 17, 2009

    I can picture the storm in my mind as I read your poem.

  • Nydia Esther on Nov 17, 2009

    i can almost smell that salty sea spray… nothing like riding out a storm in the seas..

  • martie on Nov 17, 2009

    lovely pictures and it brings back memories of watching a storm across the lake.

  • Darlene McFarlane on Nov 17, 2009

    I saw the storm and heared the wind and the crashing waves. Very well done!

  • PR Mace on Nov 17, 2009

    I could feel the waves washing over me.

  • Moses Ingram on Nov 18, 2009

    Yes I could see it, good job.

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