http://authspot.com/poetry/story/ Sat, 21 Nov 2009 14:46:17 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 http://authspot.com/poetry/story/comment-page-1/#comment-610277 Ben donovan Sun, 08 Mar 2009 03:07:52 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/story/#comment-610277 Loved how so much said and yet nothing repeated, well versed amazing piece of poetry. Loved how so much said and yet nothing repeated, well versed amazing piece of poetry.

]]> http://authspot.com/poetry/story/comment-page-1/#comment-610275 Bick Parker Mon, 12 Jan 2009 13:02:02 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/story/#comment-610275 There's a lot of anguish in this one, though a good read just the same. There’s a lot of anguish in this one, though a good read just the same.

]]> http://authspot.com/poetry/story/comment-page-1/#comment-610273 Fegger Sun, 11 Jan 2009 23:42:11 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/story/#comment-610273 Ahh, a normal relationship--so good to see that things aren't changing out there in the heart of a poet. Nice account of self examination/realization. The "anal" side of me would like to see you change "To many to start" and To much pain" to "Too many, and Too much"..also, apostrophe missing with cant (can't). Ahh, a normal relationship–so good to see that things aren’t changing out there in the heart of a poet. Nice account of self examination/realization. The “anal” side of me would like to see you change “To many to start” and To much pain” to “Too many, and Too much”..also, apostrophe missing with cant (can’t).

]]> http://authspot.com/poetry/story/comment-page-1/#comment-610271 Jennifer Sat, 10 Jan 2009 21:04:24 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/story/#comment-610271 im a new member to the website <br /> and im readin sum poems already published<br /> and this is one of my faves <br /> keep up the gd work im a new member to the website
and im readin sum poems already published
and this is one of my faves
keep up the gd work

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