A n Angel saves skaters from thin ice.

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For a moment,

there was a strained silence,

and redness in his eye,

the angel breathed in an inward sigh,

death would always entice,

the kids didn’t see the sign,

no skating, thin ice,

as the thin ice did not cave,

and the young skaters were all saved,

rescued,

and their life stayed,

the angel left,

after he prayed.

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  • Sammy2000 on Jun 18, 2009

    hey pa, no war!!!!! lol

  • Millie1986 on Jun 18, 2009

    this was good

  • Riano on Jun 20, 2009

    i like the save

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