Strange World (Haiku)

Angelji on Dec 15, 2011

Tags: colors, heaven, painted, strange, stroke

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One says she is in heaven if she feels contentment in life, having fulfillment and living good relationship.

In heaven

I see thousands of colors , as you

Stroke and painted my strange world.

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Comments (9)

vijayanths on Dec 15, 2011
Interesting.
Aroosa Gloomy on Dec 16, 2011
and that strange world of mine ceased as that stranger vanished.
ittech on Dec 16, 2011
as you

Stroke and painted my strange world.

beautyful description thanks
Yvhes P. on Dec 16, 2011
very nice piece. thanks for sharing.
MJRapp on Dec 16, 2011
Very nice.
FX777222999 on Dec 16, 2011
Really strange to be in heaven?
aheed411 on Dec 17, 2011
Better material
Mankkays Elavalakanar on Dec 17, 2011
I like this.
ittech on Dec 17, 2011
Very good sharing. I like it.thanks for this

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