Stranger in the manger some found it odd.

Away in a manger

some found a stranger

said it was odd .

Then came the light

said it was right

to call him a god .

But darkness cant see

how strangeness can be

enough to fill eyes of gaze .

A  light of no shine

and so full of  ” mine “

always to sing out a wrong . 

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  • Martin Kloess on Dec 30, 2011

    looked like you were on to something.

  • PHILLY DREAMER on Jan 2, 2012

    You kind of lost me, I was thinking of Jesus then the end kind of made me think you weren’t heading in that direction.

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