About a male customer in a flower shop. He insists on buying a bouquet made-up entirely of red roses, the traditional symbol of love. But, they are sold-out.

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An alluring
sweet smelling
bunch of flowers
pink geraniums
purple anthuriums
white lilies
very frilly
daffodils in yellow
fresh from the meadow
pansies blue
orchids in hue

‘But red roses are out
heaven knows what’s that about.’

“Close-minded you are by tradition and dreams”
said the flowers in cream.

 

‘But red roses are the true love
and not you foxglove!’

“That’s very neat
and you’re so sweet
but all say
when nothing else may
love you so much
want your heart to be touched
the thought that counts
while dreams mount
popularity is vanity
life’s packed with variety
lighten-up
get the buttercups”.

‘Tradition I say
you’re out for today.’

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  • CHAN LEE PENG on Feb 8, 2009

    Great poem!

  • gianne on Feb 8, 2009

    This was CHARMING!! Love the photo too. I’m a daisy lover myself. They are the best flowers for “loves me, loves me not.” lol

  • Christine Ramsay on Feb 8, 2009

    I love the poem. I don’t mind what flowers I receive. I love them all so I am easy to please.

    Christine

  • papaleng on Feb 8, 2009

    beautiful, like the thoughts.

  • Yovita Siswati on Feb 8, 2009

    lovely poem, with beautiful picture!

  • monica55 on Feb 11, 2009

    Thank you again for your upbuilding comments on this poem. It was written for my 18yr. old daughter who craves only roses. So I want her to see that all the other flowers are just as good.
    Cheers!
    Monica

  • Thomas L. Jones on Feb 18, 2009

    What a wonderful connection of words and exprerssions.

  • Mr Ghaz on Feb 22, 2009

    Excellent! Nicely done! That’s really great poem and nice pics too. Thanks for sharing

  • soloyal on Mar 6, 2009

    i love this poem. i gotta get my wife to read this when she get off work. good job!

  • Amsky on Mar 16, 2009

    That is right! not only roses are beautiful.Many flowers have better scents and beautifully designed by nature…
    Thanks!

  • nutuba on Mar 20, 2009

    Nicely done! The flowers are the accent, but the real gift is the heart. If the heart is in the right place, a bouquet of dandelions will bring just as much delight!

  • Mystical Whitewolf on Mar 21, 2009

    Great Poem……….and lovely photo to go with it.

  • OhSugar on Apr 2, 2009

    Great expressions. I love the picture, it compliments your poem beautifully.

  • cleblanc on Apr 6, 2009

    great poem.

  • egypt33 on Apr 12, 2009

    Beautiful poem, very deep!

  • deep blue on Apr 5, 2010

    That was well expressed poetry, Monica.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Nov 16, 2010

    The flowers are beautiful so as your poem!

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