Confused by your words, I would think your became broke because of a stroke, and your hope would be that you have had a 2nd chance. Like I stopped being dope.
The pope part has me confused.
I like the rhyming and how a stroke vs. broke is compared.

Great poem.. well-written but little confused in pope part.

Enjoyed it, Get paid cause I wanna see you survive

Very Nice….

You need your health to get wealth. No stroke okay

Very important write! Thanks for the share!

okey doke!

I was a bit confused by this one. Perhaps you were trying to tell us that a stoke is a terrible thing that causes hardship and confusion.

it’s fun!

Good rhymes.

Different

I liked it, but the pope part threw me!

So throw her some rope, e.g. a lifeline?

I like that line \”I just croak\”. So funny.

That is a bit different.

Inna

manage to b a pope?? din get it…otherwise loved the rhythms part

It’s cute and funny for me. enjoyed it

nice rhyme, but it would be much better if you choose on the last line “a cloak is just a big hoax”

Funny with some confusions on the pope aspect. Anyway, nicely rhyming words.

its great one

very different! nice write.

Interesting poem.

Interesting!

halarious and kind of confusing….but good tho.nice!

Thanks for the smile

Very clever!!