Struggling Super Hero

Undicided on Mar 2, 2009

This is a poem about a super hero that is in desperate need of your help….

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My name is captan under pants,

I save the world, I run and dance,

I’m just new, give me a chance,

For I am captain under pants,

I fly, I sing, I work at night,

Evil is the thing I fight,

May I just, or just I might,

End up in your home tonight,

For I am capitan under pants,

Could kill a man with just a glance,

I hold my ground and take a stance,

Fearless man under pants,

The reason that I’m here today,

And this is hard, for me to say,

They took my home it’s gone away,

I really need a place to stay,

I got no job, I lost that to,

I really need to stay with you,

If I could, that would be cool,

You know I would, if this was you,

All I want is just one chance,

For I am captan under pants,

Traveled far from distant lands,

Your super duper under pants.

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Westbrook on Mar 2, 2009
Captain underpants? Not in my house.
Joni Keith on Mar 2, 2009
Very impressive.
Kate Smedley on Mar 2, 2009
Go for it! Another brilliantly funny poem
Casey Kelley on Mar 2, 2009
Haha Super Cute.
Likha on Mar 2, 2009
For a while, I thought it was my kinder pupil talking. Cute and funny. It turns out beautifully when it’s the child in us talking.
Michelle on Mar 2, 2009
These guys are Supes! they dont need our help….well maybe nice one Steve!
Anne McNew on Mar 2, 2009
that\’s cute
Lauren Axelrod on Mar 2, 2009
lol
Daisy Peasblossom on Mar 2, 2009
Nicely constructed. Would this be the place to say I didn’t like the Captain Underpants book series? We stocked it in our library because little boys will read them.
Dee Gold on Mar 3, 2009
I enjoyed this one
TOPELECTRICIAN on Mar 3, 2009
FUNNY..LOL LET ME KNOW IF HE FINDS A HOME OUT THERE SOMEWHERE…….
papaleng on Mar 3, 2009
you really have a sense of humor, I enjoy reading this, quite funny.
CutestPrincess on Mar 3, 2009
wow…. cool!
spiritwalker on Mar 3, 2009
That was so funny. My kids are fighting to see the computer screen
dalray on Mar 6, 2009
That’s funny – I really enjoyed that. Thanks for the smile!
lindalulu on Mar 7, 2009
Very cool!
Kimberly on Mar 8, 2009
OMYG!! Funny!!
Denise Kawaii on Mar 8, 2009
Pure Hilarity!
thestickman on May 8, 2009
cute

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