She wonders..why?just why?

What kind of circumstances are these,I feel confined within your walls

You complicate it all and it all falls apart.

What kind of circumstances were those where we met i wonder

every little thing now makes it a blunder.

What kind of circumstances were those where i said YES

well look what’s left of it now is just a big mess!!

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  • Xandine on Mar 8, 2011

    Awwwww. How poignant. :-)

  • tanny15 on Mar 8, 2011

    fantastic.what kind of circumstances were those where i said yes………………..

  • Wizard Brown on Mar 8, 2011

    Very well written!

  • anndavey650 on Mar 9, 2011

    A lovely share about the difficulties of love…

  • alexgadd on Mar 11, 2011

    Nice poem

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