Admission to submission.

At the cost you forgot

are you lost or what ?

The spending has you broke

in bending what you choke .

To bankers its too much

them ankers , in their clutch .

Now no more is to borrow

how will you in your sorrow .

Buy whats , say not there

cry cos they dont care .

Time to get up , go again

rhyme to tell them when .

Tragic but now its true ,

magic wands it , to do  .

Admission will reveal , to stop ,

submissiom to , its all a flop. 

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  • Yvhes P. on Dec 23, 2011

    very nice poem. thanks for sharing =)

  • PHILLY DREAMER on Dec 26, 2011

    I refuse to submit to greedy money grubbing blood suckers. I’m moving to an uncharted island, and living off the wilderness from now on.

  • Tiki33 on Feb 28, 2012

    I see that you hold some humor in your poetry. Thanks for sharing!

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