Such is Forbidden

DulceCorazon on Sep 11, 2009

Just forbidden.

When nearness hurts
and deep breaths
do not ease the pain.

When arms can reach
yet will never touch
for such is forbidden.

When smiles speak
when eyes reflect
such that is hidden.

resolve strengthens.
When the heart whispers
the mind refused to listen.

Only time can heal
with distance and indifference,
myself be whole again.

The nearness hurts
and deep breaths
do not ease the pain.

11
Liked it

Comments (17)

cutedrishti8 on Sep 11, 2009
nice one to share…
raman13 on Sep 11, 2009
Impressive

Thanks

Best Regards
Diverseblogger on Sep 11, 2009
I am impressed by this poem! I think I want to make a poetry group with you ! Keep it up
Tanya Wallace on Sep 11, 2009
Beautiful work!A very heartfelt touching poem!
Shirley Shuler on Sep 11, 2009
A beautiful poem, very touching!
Rajesh Kumar Ram on Sep 11, 2009
very tender and touching!
papaleng on Sep 11, 2009
I’m impressed that myou come out with a very lovely and emotional poem using just 3 lines/stanza.
Penggaroo on Sep 12, 2009
The shortness of your poem and the lines and words used made it delicate. Good.
Jane Jane on Sep 12, 2009
very emotional.=)
wonder on Sep 13, 2009
Very deep.
Beth Suess on Sep 13, 2009
Great!
livemike on Sep 13, 2009
I love this poem..Deep,emotional,hidden…That what i love about poetry..So few words can bring you too a whole new world….
LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Sep 13, 2009
Great. I love the poem.
giftarist on Sep 14, 2009
I like this!
agriculi on Sep 15, 2009
I’m not really into poetry, but this one I do like.
Leonardo da Vinci E. on Oct 7, 2009
Surely the healing you describe in your creativity is something which we all (as humans) must come to experience.
Ponderings on Oct 9, 2009
I like this one, flows, shares emotions and feelings well!

Hi there!