Love is a wonderful feeling that we will never forget even for the worst thing happened i.e. broken love.

Someday in the past

You stood in front of me

And I looked deep into your eyes

I can see the sincere heart of you

There was some strange feeling

Flow all over my blood

And I was fall in love with you

Someday in the past

You stayed close to me

As the princess of my heart

And the soul of my life

I sacrificed everything to you

And you sacrificed everything for me too

You cheered up my life

You are really my truly angel

Someday in the past

Suddenly we went through tough days

Day after day we started quarreling

Even for silly things

A lot of misunderstandings between us

And you walk away from me

Without saying a thing

As the rain falls

The water dropped from my eyes too

In present

I am listening to a radio

And the deejay play and old song

It was our favorite song

Suddenly I am thinking of you

Wondering where are you at this moment

Wondering what are you doing now

Wondering whether you fall in love with someone

Or still lonely like me

Honestly, I miss you a lot

I miss all the sweet memories we ever had

Someday in future

Will we meet again suddenly?

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Comments (31)
  • ladydryle on Jan 12, 2010

    this really happen sometime…

  • 8Shei8 on Jan 12, 2010

    This is a very endearing and heartfelt poem. I suffered from a broken heart before and somehow you captured what I felt. Beautiful!

  • The Character on Jan 12, 2010

    Dear virtualredheart,

    Symbolic of all the people who regret a mistake that created a fissure between themselves and the one they love.

    Sincerely,

    The Character

  • The Character on Jan 12, 2010

    Dear virtual red heart,

    Symbolic of all the people who regret a mistake that created a fissure between themselves and the one they love.

    Sincerely,

    The Character

  • Videomark on Jan 12, 2010

    Something many of us can relate to.

  • Inna Tysoe on Jan 12, 2010

    well written.

    Inna

  • Eunice Tan on Jan 12, 2010

    Deep love will never die

  • alensmith on Jan 13, 2010

    Nice writeup

  • Themax on Jan 14, 2010

    woo so sad and pain ful and very sorry to read this my friend,Thanks :( very well composed!

  • wonder on Jan 15, 2010

    This happens in life. A great composiion.

  • devsir on Jan 15, 2010

    You made me weep. I still remember my lost love.

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  • Mushtaq on Jan 16, 2010

    Composed with deep love, but I like ending love in a positive node. Nevertheless Superbly composed one… I you are not alone soon…

  • emanuele522 on Jan 16, 2010

    great poem

  • Sudheer Birodkar on Jan 17, 2010

    Congrats good writing style you have

  • Intuitive on Jan 17, 2010

    I felt so sad reading this. I hope some lovers out there get a message not to take each other for granted and cherish their love if they want it to really last forever.

  • dipz091412 on Jan 17, 2010

    u got me cryin.

  • yes me on Jan 17, 2010

    Very Cathartic that one
    great post

  • alc on Jan 17, 2010

    A great write and I loved the pic! Thanks for the share!

  • Steven West on Jan 17, 2010

    Very expressive and ultimately very sad.

  • ShaFar on Jan 18, 2010

    Very good expression, and written with great feeling.

  • joyhyena29 on Jan 18, 2010

    great post^^

  • Purnomosidhi on Jan 18, 2010

    Oh.. memory… Almost every body has this kind of feeling. Touching expression :-)

  • drelayaraja on Jan 19, 2010

    wonderful and romantic..

  • Kehinde Adeniyi on Jan 20, 2010

    Sounds like its straight from the heart. Very emotional.

  • monica55 on Jan 24, 2010

    A very nostalgic outpouring from the heart; and it was done with such a deep emotion. Thanks for the read.
    Monica.

  • Marie Antoinette on Jan 26, 2010

    Beautiful and heartfelt poem.

  • flowing on Jan 26, 2010

    It happens to us all sooner and later you have captured it nicely xx

  • alensmith on Jan 27, 2010

    great job

  • deep blue on Feb 6, 2010

    Well expressed inspiring lines.

  • singming12 on Feb 12, 2010

    nice job

  • Leafygreens on Apr 30, 2010

    Nice poem. Poignant and sweet. I write poems as well. Hope you can stop by and read some of mine.

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