Just a poem.

Image by jules:stonesoup via Flickr

 

Today I am on a sugar high,

too much chocolate I have consumed.

If I do not cut back on the sweets,

I am afraid I may soon be doomed.

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  • cardy on Nov 17, 2009

    Loved it great sweet write

  • Hansika on Nov 17, 2009

    very nice one….thanks for the share

  • xoxo on Nov 17, 2009

    I love chocolates and I can understand how you feel. Well done on this.

  • Linda Lori on Nov 17, 2009

    Sweeet! =)

  • Starpisces on Nov 17, 2009

    hahaha, the chocolates look sinful…
    good one..

  • ashan1614 on Nov 17, 2009

    Your teeth and your waistline will pay (LOL)!!! :)

  • diamondpoet on Nov 17, 2009

    Very cute little poem.

  • Darlene McFarlane on Nov 17, 2009

    Another nice one!

  • ken bultman on Nov 17, 2009

    Dark chocolate’s good for you.

  • Ramalingam on Nov 17, 2009

    Nice.

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 17, 2009

    I know how you feel. My son has just brought home a big tin of Quality Street and opened up in front of me. I can’t reisist. Good work.

    Christine

  • svishnugopal on Nov 17, 2009

    wonderful write..thanks a lot for the picture…lol

  • Themax on Nov 17, 2009

    sad,but very sweet poem darla,Thanks :)

  • Goodselfme on Nov 17, 2009

    I know this feeling too. TX

  • Teves on Nov 17, 2009

    Nice post…

  • STEVE666 on Nov 17, 2009

    Careful with that trim figure, Darla.

  • Tanya Wallace on Nov 17, 2009

    I love chocolate!! A bar a day keeps the sweet tooth away.lol I just go for a long walk the next day.

  • V rank on Nov 18, 2009

    You are what you eat…! In a positive way, you are happy because eat something that makes you happy… cheers…!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 18, 2009

    please send over

    some left overs

    chocos i love

    and am not scared

    to be doomed together

  • lillyrose on Nov 19, 2009

    hahah… cute!

  • PhoenixRox on Nov 21, 2009

    LOL. This was me last week..haha. Thanks for making me laugh

  • CutestPrincess on Dec 7, 2009

    tempting chocolate…

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