Feel the pain that is felt in some hearts.

Sharp, pointed, piercing and stabbing
Sadness glows in those eyes
As they look into the mirror crying
Suffering pain, which they no longer can disguise

They look for happiness, tried and lost
They try but now they just can’t take it
Tried so hard but didn’t succeed, left exhausted
Their quest for happiness, they quit

Staring back at them is the pain
The way things have gone by
Their tries which were left in vain
Now they rather bid life goodbye

They start with a small scratch
Blood soon starts to flow down,
It grows from a scratch to a big patch
Soon in their own blood they begin to drown

Blood, blood, its not enough
They still experience the internal hurt
They’re life just keeps getting so tough
Why does it seem his fury on them god exerts?

Soon they give up, they give in
They impose that one last fatal cut
And all their pain shoots out from within
And that’s it, their life halts, they’re eyes finally shut

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  • MelindaStone on Jul 24, 2008

    Wow. That was a really good poem. You put a lot of emotion into writting the poem which I like. Would you do me a favor and look at one of my poems, I am trying to get a lot of views.Plz

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