Beach houses filled up once a year, restaurants all packed…
Warm breezes flit through the beach
Leaves twirl through the air
Butterflies fly just out of reach
Children laugh without a care
They pile their shovels, also, and
Their buckets, toys, and more
To go among the water and sand
And play by the quiet shore
Pelicans fly by noisily
In a little group
Squawking and diving busily
And doing a loop-the-loop
Beach houses filled up once a year
Restaurants all packed.
Shopping malls all in full gear
All shelves and hangers and racks.
On a grassy hillside
A duo picnicking.
Reminiscing of old days flying kites
Enjoying the peaceful scene
I think it was a good poem but some of the ands could be replaced with commas and it would read much better. 
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