Comments on: Summer

By: Miss Heda

Miss Heda — Sun, 12 Apr 2009 15:36:42 +0000

ooh i remeber going away during the summer hoildays when i was a kid. this poem brought some good memories back =o)

By: icanfixthat

icanfixthat — Sun, 08 Mar 2009 05:45:21 +0000

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By: miss cornelia

miss cornelia — Sun, 01 Mar 2009 18:18:30 +0000

I think it was a good poem but some of the ands could be replaced with commas and it would read much better.

By: Emma C S

Emma C S — Sun, 01 Mar 2009 17:44:59 +0000

Nice imagery, it sounds very peaceful. I like the addition of pelicans, too, more unusual.

By: Stephanie Moore

Stephanie Moore — Mon, 16 Feb 2009 20:40:51 +0000

This makes me ache for the leafy green summer.
Good work, Noelle.

By: sweet g

sweet g — Sat, 07 Feb 2009 04:12:16 +0000

I want to go to the beach now. It’s cold here and your writing was so vivid that I could see it.