Summer Breezes

Rebecca MacLary on Jun 20, 2010

Tags: Breeze, breezes, Haiku, heat relief, Poetry, relief from heat, sticky, summer

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Lounging in the yard or on the beach, those summer breezes save us from the heat of summer.

The summer breezes

Bring relief from heat and make

Us feel less sticky.

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jamesII on Jun 29, 2010
I think this poem could appear directly to the senses a bit more.
you have breezes! What kind? How do they feel? Like peppermint? Do you know what I mean?

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