My first poem I composed.

I felt at peace that bright summer day

As I lay in the shade of the big oak tree

Listening to the whispering of the quiet brook

Softly treading it’s way to the wide open sea.

With the rustling of the leaves pushed by the soft summer breeze

whispering in my ear,

I watched in delight a delicate, golden winged butterfly

Flitting from Flower to flower in the cool open air

And my heart then opened to the might of the Creator and the

Everlasting beauty of His creations in display

And  felt a touch of Heaven on that soft floor of leaves that bright

Summer day.

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  • nathalie on Jun 25, 2009

    wow this poem was amazing and it’s only a 10 years old boy who made it. incredible. I cry everytime i see it

  • john on Jul 1, 2009

    really nice poem

  • nice on Jul 3, 2009

    nice poem

  • FofolleAnne on Jan 9, 2011

    ma dire comme tous… nice poem. tu t’es forcé faire ça certain.

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