Summer Love

PHILLY DREAMER on Jan 13, 2012

Summer Love is a sequence of Fib poems. This is my selection for the Fibonacci Poetry Challenge.

In
May
I dreamt
Of summer.
Sunshine on my face.
Children at play all through the day.
Me and my love alone in our very special place.

Then
June
Arrived
So sweetly.
We walked hand in hand.
Waves from the ocean sloshed our feet.
As we set ourselves to lay across the hot beach sand.

Then
Came
July
All to fast.
Deeper our bond grew,
Promising our love forever,
We explored our waves of passion in the ocean blue.

Oh
My
August!
How did we
Make it here so fast.
I hope these memories will hold us
So that our love through the rest of the year lasts and lasts.

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Comments (18)

HannanRKhan on Jan 13, 2012
Wicked! How’s the bodybuilding going?
ImKarn23 on Jan 13, 2012
summer should be 12 months a year! On many levels..nice one Phil
girishpuri on Jan 13, 2012
i like it
sheilanewton on Jan 13, 2012
Superb. Now I can dream of Summer again. Still can’t take up the challence, Philly Dreamer. Sorry, honey!
JellyBean091507 on Jan 13, 2012
I really like that…
William C. Jefferson on Jan 13, 2012
I like this one!
prsol46 on Jan 13, 2012
Aww, that’s very nice!
pogi253 on Jan 13, 2012
nice post
ramonf77 on Jan 14, 2012
A well written poem.
Moses Ingram on Jan 14, 2012
I like it. Thank you for sharing. Blessings.
jaihoji on Jan 14, 2012
a well said poem
MJRapp on Jan 15, 2012
That is pretty cool.
Martin Kloess on Jan 15, 2012
good job. you know I like it.
ittech on Jan 15, 2012
well written , but sadly in india summer is terrible
AmosTheCat on Jan 16, 2012
Fantastic. Where the hell my muse when I need here?
SharifaMcFarlane on Jan 16, 2012
Lovely.
Elove Poetry on Jan 17, 2012
great
Elove Poetry on Jan 19, 2012
nice, but i don’t see your style fitting in the textbook description of fibonacci… can i play around with it

Hi there!