Place where love blossomed.

We spent our days in summer’s field
Where promises were flower’s yield
And nothing was from us concealed
This season put aside for two
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Each breeze would call me to your side
To touch the dreams that hearts confide
And let our kisses be our guide
Through summer’s field where wishes grew
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We’d find delight in holding tight
Such flights would summer’s field ignite
That nothing quite would feel so right
Until those youthful days were through
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Then seasons of cold winters came
With biting winds so hard to tame
We fought to guard our precious flame
Through mornings filled with bitter dew
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Then in your eyes came yesterday
Though outer youth had gone astray
Were summer’s field that far away
For love whose blossom had proved true

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  • Emancipation on Sep 8, 2012

    That’s cool. Thanks.

  • norlaw on Sep 8, 2012

    Very good as usual.

  • Kharla Jolly on Sep 8, 2012

    A strength in this relationship that passing years couldn’t take away. That’s true love! What a beautiful poem, another excellent work.

  • Kai Vicky on Sep 8, 2012

    Awesome. So beautifully written.

  • stevetheblogger on Sep 8, 2012

    Martin I wish I had new you when I was young you could have written all my love letters for me. Great Piece
    Best Wishes
    stevetheblogger

  • Tulan on Sep 8, 2012

    That’s the sweetest poem.

  • ladym33 on Sep 8, 2012

    Very nice.

  • Jswana on Sep 9, 2012

    So sweet. Thanks for sharing. :)

  • Stephen Rayfield on Sep 9, 2012

    i like this, got me thinking of my summers past!

  • misterdd on Sep 9, 2012

    Very nice. Good work

  • Robin L on Sep 9, 2012

    Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing:)

  • elee on Sep 9, 2012

    ǝƃpǝlʍouʞ ɟo ʎɐldsıp ʇuɐıllıɹq ǝlɔıʇɹɐ ʇɐǝɹƃ sıɥʇ ƃuıɹɐɥs ɹoɟ sʞuɐɥʇ puɐ ˙pǝǝpuı ƃuıʇsǝɹǝʇuı ʎɹǝʌ oS

  • gaby7 on Sep 9, 2012

    Absolutely Romantic!

  • streakanime on Sep 9, 2012

    Lovely piece. :) You are such a loyal viewer/commenter. I just wanted to return the favor ~!

  • Stable on Sep 9, 2012

    Another wondeful piece of writing Martin, well done.

  • AshleyApathy on Sep 9, 2012

    deep :3

  • shefaliarora on Sep 10, 2012

    Awesome. So beautifully written.

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