A tip toe paddle.

Took a walk, Looked all around

Saw boats, afloat upon the river

A life spent around rivers it seemed

Born not a hundred yards, from the dry dock

Next twenty years, on one side or the other

Family all dispersed to rivers new

Some play around a Saskatchewan bend

some have a Colorado splash

Others they roam around the isle of dogs

Oh this river of life it flows and flows

Even when it is mirror like on a button moon night

Reflecting all but hate.

3
Liked it
Comments (8)
  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Feb 14, 2010

    Nice job so I expect you to continue to deliver. :)

  • Neva Flores on Feb 14, 2010

    Wonderful write….

  • ceegirl on Feb 14, 2010

    great share

  • VTech on Feb 14, 2010

    Good Post

  • joyhyena29 on Feb 14, 2010

    great post^^

  • drelayaraja on Feb 15, 2010

    wonderful share :0

  • Atanacio on Feb 15, 2010

    Some play around a Saskatchewan bend

    Another line that will stay with me for a few days

  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 15, 2010

    Nice share…..

Leave a Comment

Hi there!

Hello! Welcome to Authspot, the spot for creative writing.
Read some stories and poems, and be sure to subscribe to our feed!

Find the Spot

Loading