Just had a few thoughts that went astray….

If I could?…. hell yes!

wouldn’t you….First things first!

Now, what about that first?…. Kiss, dance, romance

Well, what ya got to say now ?…. Well maybe It was awkward some, but sweet as bun

Maybe I’m different I would like to…. hell  hell is getting a few mentions don’t ask me why?

For one thing I ain’t ever been to hell…. but if some of the places I’ve seen and been

Hell, must have left, and gone somewhere else…. hell is just a state of mind some

Lots of folk tell me, they had a visit, but when I get there…. its moved away

Same when I go to heaven…. Now there’s a place

Yes, everywhere I go…. heaven comes too.

…………………………………………

Think I’ll play me a tune…. a tune for its mellowness

Words well, lyrics …. my my my my

Wouldn’t it be just lovely…. wouldn’t you say

wouldn’t you want me…. wanting you awwe you …. wanting me

poppy cock I hear you…. Scream! and shout? hu!

Got no doubts…. looking at the floor I see Ahhhhh!

Just for a laugh! …. lets romance the chance

Poetical licence…. peeka boo…. its all just fun

I said you said right then fred!…. one big hit I, think?

Who! goes first? is that me or you??…. still ripping the the wet stuff

Caught on yet why tell a story with one set of words…. tell it with?

……………………………………………………………..

               Sunday.

Sunday is fun…. well most Sundays

Just sit around doing…. as I please pretty much

Listen to some tunes…. my escape its pretty much a diary thing

It’s my Sunday hit…. so sorry if it’s not what you like, but hey!

         IT’S MY SUNDAY TOO.

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  • Nitin Mudgal on Jan 24, 2010

    Nice words.

  • Neva Flores on Jan 24, 2010

    Excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • bailieman on Jan 24, 2010

    You are top notch at free verse.

  • Atanacio on Jan 25, 2010

    almost too perfect well done

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