A poem about the day.

Pencil does not touch paper

in meaningful sentences

as I trod through a Sunday morning

better spent walking

or sleeping,

my demons allayed a bit.



copyright/all rights reserved Audrey Howitt 2011

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  • Wrath Warbone on Nov 3, 2011

    I am glad Sunday’s work well for you. Nice poem. Good imagery.

  • quiet voice on Nov 3, 2011

    ….Very good.

  • erwinkennythomas on Nov 4, 2011

    wrestling with demons!

  • beingwell on Nov 5, 2011

    Interesting.

  • Audrey Howitt on Nov 5, 2011

    Thank you Rizza! Thank you erwinkenny and thank you quiet voice

  • sheilanewton on Nov 13, 2011

    Brilliant. And i’m reading this on a ‘lazy’ Sunday. Want to go back to bed!

  • Victoria Jenkins on Nov 25, 2011

    Wow. This is great. The last sentence seems a tad disjointed from the rest of the poem, but I understand it. Haha, I wanna see more now.

  • ladym33 on Dec 2, 2011

    Very good poem.

  • sheilanewton on Dec 4, 2011

    Well-deserving af another ‘like’ methinks. I just love this!

  • Audrey Howitt on Dec 4, 2011

    Thank you Sheila, ladym33 and Victoria!!! I greatly appreciate your read and comments—

  • ladym33 on Dec 5, 2011

    I am all for sleeping in on Sundays. Nice poem.

  • Wrath Warbone on Dec 24, 2011

    Demons hide out on Sundays, it seems. Good thing! Give that pen a break before it catches fire. Merry Christmas to them and you, too.

  • ittech on Dec 25, 2011

    beautyful

  • Audrey Howitt on Dec 28, 2011

    Thank you wrath and ittechil!

  • Yvhes P. on Jan 2, 2012

    very nice share. thanks!

  • Yvhes P. on Jan 2, 2012

    beautiful poem indeed. thanks for sharing.

  • ittech on Jan 2, 2012

    very nice poem

  • ittech on Jan 2, 2012

    as I trod through with a Sunday morning

  • ittech on Jan 9, 2012

    Thanks for the very informative article

  • Vinaya says good bye on Jan 24, 2012

    Beautiful poem

  • Audrey Howitt on Jan 25, 2012

    Thank you ittech and Vinaya!

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