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The rain went away

It is a clear sunny day

No dark clouds today

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  • lillyrose on Sep 28, 2009

    uncomplicated, I like that and the picture from the grave yard is beautiful x

  • ken bultman on Sep 28, 2009

    Good haiku.

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 28, 2009

    That is lovely and goes well with the photo.

    Christine

  • giftarist on Sep 28, 2009

    Nice haiku..

  • Melody SJAL on Sep 28, 2009

    Lovely portrait and so true for us here.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Sep 28, 2009

    it is not sunny

    here its raining

    i’m not being funny

    ”””
    this this what u all call HIKU?????

  • Goodselfme on Sep 28, 2009

    Well done Haiku!

  • Sourav on Sep 28, 2009

    Nice… and a good clear pic as well!

  • rizzei on Sep 28, 2009

    the rain did go away from our place but flooded streets are still everywhere..nice read! :)

  • Ramalingam on Sep 28, 2009

    A very nice sunny day and a nice haiku too.

  • STEVE666 on Sep 28, 2009

    A rhyming haiku. Well done.

  • Roberto Sardelli 1 on Sep 28, 2009

    lovely, put a smile on my face, thank you for another very well wriiten poem.

  • CA Johnson on Sep 28, 2009

    I really liked your haiku! It was only sunny here for a little while today because it started raining.

  • Ruby Hawk on Sep 29, 2009

    nice, I love your picture, too.

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