Poem about how the desert sunset compares to an incoming tide. The beauty of the scene.

Sunset Tide

At eventide, sunset -

color spill of hues,

too soon hides behind

mountain in my view.

Yet soft streaks reach out,

mingle with misty blue fog.

Glint of gold on snowy peaks

changes to crimson as Sol

weaves his magic.

Here in the desert, the tide

comes in at sunset, then drifts

to seclusion, reflects outward,

ebbs into darkness.

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Comments (4)
  • Katie Marie on Jun 6, 2009

    Lovely comparison. That line is beautifully descriptive.

  • Kate Smedley on Jun 10, 2009

    That’s a lovely poem Janet, very descriptive. Welcome to Triond.

  • Lauren Axelrod on Jun 13, 2009

    Really beautiful work. Great so far.

  • razumtina on Oct 27, 2009

    GREAT!!!!!

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