Superhuman

Coya92 on Dec 31, 2008

Tags: change, expressed, feelings, love, me, ordinary, person, superhuman

Love Changed Me To Be Not An ordinary person.

You change my whole life
Don’t know what you did to me with you love!
I’m feeling existence with intelligence and
abilities exceeding normal human compatibility.
It’s crazy…I’m not being the usual me.
You have taken apart of me.
Just know that I think above and beyond others.
This is not an ordinary feeling
It’s a feeling of alienation.
But it feels good.
Superhuman I would call it.
A super human heart beats in me.
And the love has set me free.
How you do this? I ask myself over and over again.
It’s incredible, impossible, and I hope it would never come to an end.

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jeff on Jan 1, 2009
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rutherfranc on Jan 1, 2009
wish I was a teenager again..nice piece of writing
CE Lewallen on Jan 1, 2009
very cute. your voice is one so familiar, maybe because it’s the voice of a teenager. good job.
Darla Smith on Jan 2, 2009
A beautiful poem.
anna on Jan 2, 2009
this poem is very awesome
joe carlson on Jan 2, 2009
awww man this poem; you really expressed all your feelings.
Kelly Anderson on Jan 2, 2009
you seem like a great writer
Milton H Peebles III on Jan 3, 2009
Very Good!!! !!!
jamie on Jan 4, 2009
cute.
denise carter on Jan 11, 2009
this poem is outstanding…never would expect this from a teen!
Intrepidus on Jan 15, 2009
Nice one! Being in love is always feels different, but somehow very great.
Jose Burgos on Jan 15, 2009
Beautiful. you are a very good writer!
teyana murray on Jan 19, 2009
i can really tell you are in love…im feeling what you are feeling!
susan fryer on Jan 19, 2009
good luck! this poem can take your far!
keith murray on Jan 21, 2009
outstanding…good inspirational writer! =]
Henry Carter on Jan 22, 2009
How long have you been writing poetry??
Jack Overton on Jan 22, 2009
Hayy This is Great!
Uni on Jan 22, 2009
I love it…it can’t get no better!

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