Vanilla shakes and microwavable hot dogs.

Supreme Dairy Bar — 1967

Nicky West holds court

in the Supreme Dairy Bar 

with the regular lunchtime crowd;

talking about the Chicago Cubs.

Some listen and humor him,

others quietly eat burgers and fries

sipping Cherry Cokes and Green Rivers.

I pay no attention to Nicky-

just waiting for my lunch.

He’s a little weird but friendly.

Most of the older kids at school though

make fun of twenty-something Nicky

calling him slow or retard but I

wanted no part of their idiot chorus.

For my lunch today-

a hot dog zapped in a microwave

followed by a vanilla shake-

poured thick and smooth

from a frosty metal cup

into a tall tulip-shaped glass

then sucked through straw.

“Don’t drink that shake too fast kid,”

says Nicky, “Cuz you’ll get

yourself an ice cream headache.”

I don’t listen because I am ten

and ten year olds know enough

about the world including how fast

or not how fast to drink a shake.

But Nicky’s right and laughs

when he sees my frozen grimace

as the cold shoots to my brain.

“See, I told ya kid,” Nicky smiles.

“Just rub your temples and you’ll be okay.”

He’s right; it works.

We end up leaving at the same time.

I watch Nicky climb on top his bike

and set off down the street.

I’m happy that I am not like the

other kids at school-

as I wave goodbye to Nicky

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Comments (16)
  • Frances Lawrence on Nov 10, 2009

    A nice piece of writing. My kids call that ice headache Brain Freeze.

  • sexyme on Nov 10, 2009

    nice

  • Shirley Shuler on Nov 10, 2009

    Nice one, Papa

  • Guy Hogan on Nov 11, 2009

    A nice slice of life sketch about being young. You catch Nicky and the view point character well.

  • Teves on Nov 11, 2009

    Well writen…

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 11, 2009

    A nice write

  • Linda Lori on Nov 11, 2009

    Very nice story!

  • Themax on Nov 11, 2009

    very well written,Thanks for sharing :)

  • johnnydod on Nov 11, 2009

    good one

  • Joe Dorish on Nov 11, 2009

    Nice slice of life story. Remember getting brain freezes as a kid, they hurt but were kind of fun.

  • Francois Hagnere on Nov 11, 2009

    Very enjoyable read. Thank you.

  • giftarist on Nov 11, 2009

    Thanks.. I enjoyed reading this..Well done!

  • lillyrose on Nov 11, 2009

    That was so lovely, I am proud to have children that would most likely befriend Nicky too. x

  • Darla Smith on Nov 11, 2009

    Very nice and an enjoyable read.

  • shanthu on Nov 11, 2009

    good post

  • Lady Sunshine on Nov 11, 2009

    How sweet, Jeffery. I took a step back in time, witnessing friendship and compassion through your(??) eyes at the Supreme Dairy Bar.

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