Surrender to Me

cardy on Jan 31, 2010

A short poem..of giving in to love.

The waves of love Wash over me,
now drowning slowly in its tranquil sea.

I take the chance and surrender with my crystal white flag,
release my heart from its cocooned bag.

You stand before me arms stretched out eyes full of hope,
now my heart decides to elope.

Fears are washed away as if the tide of love ordered it this way,
now in you’re arms I lay.

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Comments (14)

giftarist on Jan 31, 2010
I love it, especially the last line. Good work!
Alistair Briggs on Jan 31, 2010
i enjoyed the brevity of this piece, succint, straight to the point and very well expressed. The emotions come through well.
Alistair Briggs on Jan 31, 2010
Sorry, meant to add. in the first line I thought ‘wash’ may have been a better choice of word for the second ‘waves’, it would tie it nicely with the ‘washed’ in the last line.

Just an opinon
albert1jemi on Jan 31, 2010
beautifully written thnx for the share
Darla Cooke on Jan 31, 2010
Lovely poem!
Mickey Pig Knuckles on Jan 31, 2010
Awwww Cadry, what a meaningful love poem you have composed here with such a depth of emotion. I admire the second stanza as you decide to give in and let the beauty of love flow freely. Amazing poem Dear Lady…

Mickey Pig Knuckles
poornimaj on Jan 31, 2010
thanks
mkd1788 on Jan 31, 2010
ohh..ho..that’s the very good work..nice poem..
Angela Ohm on Jan 31, 2010
This Is a beautiful poem !
Melody SJAL on Feb 1, 2010
Love it!
Hazel Crowther on Feb 1, 2010
Nice work.
Antonette Ramos on Feb 3, 2010
nice one…
LOVELYHONEY on Feb 5, 2010
good short and sweet

when\\\’s the treat

good work do continue

lhlhlh
lillyrose on Feb 13, 2010
very beautiful!

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