I feel like my father has full control but he wont for long.

You must feel so good right now,
like a king.
Everyone take a bow.
King of lies, deceat, and hate has arrived.
I have only survived,
the beginning,
of all his sinning,
all the fake grinning.
All the tears hidden.
None that you can see,
hidden even from me.
I am numb to your words,
you can’t hurt me.
I’m flying with the birds.
You won’t find the key,
I’ve locked it in with me.
Throw me in your chambers.
I won’t loose any sleep,
and no i refuse to weep.
You will see my pride,
even after i have died.
You can’t hurt me.
Never have i ever cried.

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  • Peter Cimino on Feb 11, 2009

    I had a very similar relationship with my father, so I can totally relate. I feel for anyone who goes through the same. You will definitely rise above it! Well done.

  • papaleng on Feb 12, 2009

    I can clearly see your predicament, having a father treating you harsh is a big No. no. Though your actions is a typical human behavior still heis your father. I would suggest that you keep on praying that the Lord changed his attitude and at the same time try to go on with your life, go pursue your dreams.

  • Sharona on Feb 20, 2009

    Nice poem, emotions revieled in anger can be strong.

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