Suspended in my thoughts.

When you’re suspended
in the wind
any regrets
when you’re suspended
rays are your defense

why are you so true
your thoughts
is as surprised

You have the idea of a feather
and you know that the heart smoking
if you keep it off
then, is like burning candle

When you’re suspended
thinking about a future
trying to look calm
when you’re suspended

why are you so true
your thoughts
is in my vein

is the instinct of any remorse
the motion of your
blood shaken
looks like my ……

tired and this paper
full of concepts and words
are you .. you who you are
is as slow pleasure
and only god among us
will restore our chains

Raj Aryan is a content writer. Presently working with a India Tours company. Find travel packages and on-line at  Cheap flights  tickets to India, providing the best selection and availability of flights to India

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  • LOVELYHONEY on Apr 20, 2010

    nice suspension

    let ur love u regain
    and in her memory
    may u sustain

    lovely abstract poetry
    difficult for many to follow

  • LOVELYHONEY on Apr 21, 2010

    u must read more people

    so that then they can read more of yours

    good words with a great imagery

    now onwards

    my comments will be on a different plane

    u will see

  • Rishikaagarwal on Apr 21, 2010

    very nice..
    lovely and awesome poetry simply!!

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