Awearing is good, but when constructive and effective, it becomes even better.

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It was during summer
With shining sun and pleasant weather.
Every one doing its chores
With enthusiasm and good moods.
I heard a complain which sounds odd
As though no option to behold.
In fact it was annoying
As the idiot game was to scratch and dig.
To alter their roughness in life
Into popularity and fame.
But there is always a spot to think
To expand wisdom and let irrationality shrink.
Good thinking facilitates adaptation
For problem of others or our own.
Hence better to swear good and act
To bring a better social life in our planet.

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  • Glassie on Apr 23, 2009

    I am no poet or grammer expert – I liked the undertone, the thought process but found this piece a little hard to read.

  • mekaws on May 1, 2009

    i think it’s light on the surface but actually it’s deep, nice.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on May 5, 2009

    very well done,i like the flow of words..keep penning

  • K Kristie on May 6, 2009

    I especially agree with and like the last two lines. Nice message.

  • Anne McNew on May 7, 2009

    well done, perhaps we also have great roles as triond writers: to write something (always) to make our planet a better place to line in.

  • Leonardo da Vinci E. on Dec 2, 2009

    Human must do good because it eliminates disorder and chaos in the system which is running everything and (in the end) everybody. We are only hurting ourselves when we do the unjustly acts, because we are reducing the smoothe and predictable virtues within the system.

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