A tribute to my maternal grandmother.

Long braided tresses form a twisted garland
of coal black hair, adorning the nape of her neck,
while a fine silken web of netting
forms the final cap on her dark raven crown,
so gently laced with silver.
Scandinavian olive skin, weathered from the sun,
provides the warmth of a leather matting
gracefully framing the softness of her smile.
The curve of her aging Swedish spine
magnifies her slightness of height while
her steps shuffle slowly, in shoes
that have slowly molded themselves
around the deformities of her feet.

Work worn hands reach into overstuffed cupboards,
holding life’s mementos saved from many days past,
and her eyes sparkle as she relays to wide-eyed listeners
the random memories that flow from the stories they hold.
Treasure hunts are led through her humble storage rooms
created of necessity from long abandoned transports.
Hand sewn garments of childhood days rest retired,
faded and hanging limp, on large and rusty nails.
Spinning wheel of former days sits silent,
no more singing that mournful weaver’s song.

Her christened name was Bertha,
Mrs. Nelson she became, as later she was wed,
but Grandma was the sacred designation
that she cherished. Borne with love and honor,
from all who laid that claim to her, she gracefully received.

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  • alc on Oct 21, 2009

    A great write!! Very thoughtful and full of emotion! Thanks for the share!

  • Darla Cooke on Oct 21, 2009

    Lovely poem!

  • ken bultman on Oct 21, 2009

    What wonderful memories. I was fortunate enough to have known all my grandparents. I often recall them with fondness. Your poem helped me do it again.

  • Michael Degenhardt on Oct 21, 2009

    Superb writing, love the details in this. Michael

  • Tlchimes on Oct 21, 2009

    This was a great read…. thank you for sharing her with us.

  • cafftee on Oct 21, 2009

    Loved the detail, I could almost see her and feel the strength of your feelings for her.

  • Jonie on Oct 21, 2009

    How very beautiful, thanks!

  • maranatha on Oct 21, 2009

    This was incredible. She must have been a wonderful woman.

  • Katie Marie on Oct 21, 2009

    She was a very important part of my life and this only begins to touch on who she was. I consider her my greatest spiritual influence and their are many others who would say the same and many who called her Grandma that didn’t have a familial connection to warrant it.

  • Casey Mack on Oct 21, 2009

    Oh, this is worthy of wet eyes and lumpy throat. A wonderful piece of work, Katie, a chance for us to know just enough to build a mental image of this woman of strength and character. It makes me wish I’d a chance to know her.

    Lovely work.

  • stryka66 on Oct 22, 2009

    What a great piece of descriptive writing – and a wonderful honouring of a special person – I sure would love to have met Bertha

  • STEVE666 on Oct 22, 2009

    Nicely done tribute to your gran, Katie.

  • Duff D Moss on Oct 25, 2009

    Wow – that was wonderful. This really shows what a profound affect grandparents can have to their families if allowed. Very classy entry for the challenge. Thanks dude.

  • Brenda Nelson on Oct 25, 2009

    no relation.. I dont think!
    good poem

  • David Crerand on Oct 26, 2009

    What a wonderful tribute to a woman who obviously meant a gret deal to you. Beautifully written. Truly absorbing. Great job.

  • hfj on Oct 26, 2009

    Lovely honor you bestowed upon your grandmother, and i\’m sure she was very well deserving. I too had such high regard for my grandmother, and was very touched by your poem. Well done Katie.

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Oct 26, 2009

    It brought back memories of my grandmother too, she was Danish.

  • Valerie Curtiss on Oct 26, 2009

    Very well written

  • oldster on Oct 27, 2009

    Lovely tribute Katie Marie.

  • Brenda Berg on Oct 27, 2009

    Thank you for remembering Grandma Nelson in such a beautiful way!

  • Aardaerimus on Nov 10, 2009

    That was beautifully written, Katie. The imagery is striking and powerful, and really leaves you feeling like you\’re right there in the room with her. It also brings back a flood of memories of my own Grandmother.

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