A sonnet about falling in love and that first kiss.

Image by Elmo Alves via Flickr

Fashioned of beads around her neck

Twisted brown strands dangle down her thin shoulder.

Falling gracefully upon her breast.

Soft and delicate like no other, oh I wanted to hold her.

 

Bright, bold, glimmering, to my surprise.

The natural curvy of her smile.

The sun’s reflection bounces off those perfect eyes.

Holds everything but denial.

 

Surrounded by terra firma, picnic golden setting, a ponder look on her face.

Thoughts abound, gleefully she looks at me realizing what she had done.

I wonder heartlessly, what does she see in me that is so great.

Intuitively, gentle manner, her hand touched mine in playful fun.

 

In a voice so kind and sure, she whispers me a song.

From a splendor of glory she had sung.

An angel’s calling, a majestic tale, singing to me that I belong.

Showering me with love and dreams long gone.

 

We became sybaritic and closed our tired eyes to final rest.

The air filled with lilac fragrance, let loose by petal’s roam.

Emotions incomprehensible, sated, in this fine time, it’s hard to express.

Head swirled, dizziness, embrace, harmonic rapture, sending me home.

T.S.Garp © Copyright 2009 All Rights Reserved.

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  • Aleena on Oct 14, 2009

    This was absolutely beautiful
    Romantic, sweet, I love it!
    Really great work

  • Teves on Oct 14, 2009

    Wow so sweet…

  • Joie Schmidt on Oct 15, 2009

    Beautiful & romantic*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 22, 2009

    Wow! that is such an impressive and romantic poem. Beautiful.

    Christine

  • Precious Illusions on Feb 23, 2010

    so romantic…

  • Darla Cooke on Feb 24, 2010

    Lovely and romantic!

  • deep blue on Apr 23, 2010

    Nice poetry drawn from a love experience. Well done.

  • lauralu on Apr 30, 2012

    Wonderful portrait if love!

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