What is this thing called love.

 

You are as silent as a predator going after it’s unknowing prey.

You hide in the shadows but seem to find you’re own way.

 

You have control over people with out their say.

 

You can drive people insane,

make them feel a sense of shame,

with the new powers that they gain.

 

You can touch their hearts sometimes with pain.

 

You are the one that takes all the blame.

 

Through out the ages you have remain the same.

 

No one can tame you,

no one would ever try to,

as we still try to understand you.

 

You are the thing called love the gift from up above.

 

 

The sweet thing called love.

The bitter thing called love.

 

We may never find the answers to this drug.

Pure addiction,

comes with pain,

but we are never the same,

when love comes to play it’s games.

 

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  • Melody SJAL on Sep 19, 2009

    The very essence of love captured fully and nicely. Great job.

  • Shawn O on Sep 19, 2009

    Great piece!

  • chantell on Sep 19, 2009

    That was deep, Cardy

  • Goodselfme on Sep 19, 2009

    Very expressly penned with great depth, my friend.

  • Lee Ness on Sep 19, 2009

    It was very truethful and you feel this poem
    Thanks for the great work Cardy
    Lee Ness

  • Peter Cimino on Sep 19, 2009

    Wonderful piece!

  • writing4angels on Sep 21, 2009

    Very touching and expressive.

  • Jane Jane on Sep 21, 2009

    nice flow of words. love is indeed a sweet bitter thing.

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