A love poem.

Holding-Hands.jpg holding hands image by x0holly0xPhoto Source

You are the one, I am so glad to say
My smile is shining so bright today

You are the one, our hands are the perfect fit
and because of that, I know this love is it

I know it is true, and this love is real
You make me feel happier than I have ever felt

You are the one, no one can come between
Once we are together again no one can intervene

You are the one, and I’m just waiting till I can hold onto you again
I will just have to settle for sweet dreams of you until then

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  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Jun 24, 2010

    Truly lovely poetry.

  • babygirl3605 on Jun 24, 2010

    Good job.

  • krrymarie on Jun 24, 2010

    lovely poem!

  • Goodselfme on Jun 24, 2010

    Beautifully penned piece of delightful prose. Good imagery and the flow is great too. thank you.

  • bethann on Jun 24, 2010

    Great write…love has a way of carring us to that tranquil place of contentment and joy, and you scribed it so nicely. thanks for sharing. bethann

  • amilia snow on Jun 27, 2010

    amazing…
    i totally loved it.
    “Our hands a perfect fit…”
    so matches the photo u inserted here~ good job!

  • STEVE666 on Jun 28, 2010

    Nice verse, PE.

  • jamesII on Jul 12, 2010

    And, One can leave us so lonely! Maybe a better one is oneself? At least, you will never leave yourself alone–know what I mean! Humans are so disappointing! Why? Cool!

  • heidiefernandez on Jul 13, 2010

    loved it.. nice post…as usual…

  • S A JOHNSON on Aug 8, 2010

    Very sweet!

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