This is for the will power that faded away. With the New Year and no new holidays, pledges are made to lose the weight…

Oh Halloween, your so sweet,

Little darlings dressed like gnomes,

Whoops, did I eat that extra treat?

Need to get more, leave my home.

Thanksgivings arrives with shorter days,

A little pie, maybe some more.

My hips aware that this will stay,

I’d tell you my weight, but why bore?

Holiday season in full swing

Munchies galore, have just a taste.

I’ll start my diet after this fling,

Surely these morsels won’t find my waist.

Now the New Year upon us, pledges made.

No more candies, no more wine.

Holidays are over, the pounds they stayed,

What’s that dear? Oh, well, for my Valentine!

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Comments (13)
  • Debra. on Jan 22, 2009

    lol…. That was so cute and funny! That was a sheer joy to read!

    Thanks for sharing, Clay. well done and God bless.

  • Dendro Azures on Jan 22, 2009

    Yeah, there’s just no escaping it is there?

  • Likha on Jan 22, 2009

    Nice one! Good thing I never had problems with my weight… Have a hearty Valentine dinner!

  • Sotiris on Jan 22, 2009

    Likely I lost 2 kilos after Christmas! Didn’t eat so many sweets!

  • Glynis Smy on Jan 22, 2009

    Mmmm I am keeping quiet, well I will say, great work!

  • rutherfranc on Jan 22, 2009

    same thing happened to me..

  • James DeVere on Jan 22, 2009

    …………..
    That’s sweet . j
    …………..

  • Darren Goad on Jan 22, 2009

    Nice work. Wish I could say it was unfamiliar territory. Nine Kilos in France over Xmas (he types as he munches on a biscuit)

  • nutuba on Jan 24, 2009

    Nicely done! I like the light hearted frankness in the tone … nice flow too.

  • BC Doan on Jan 24, 2009

    Very cute and fun to read..

  • Melody SJAL on Jan 26, 2009

    So nice, I enjoyed it a lot, thanks.

  • eddiego65 on Jan 27, 2009

    Fun read! Great flow!

  • Gayle Hamilton on Feb 1, 2009

    Trick or treat!….lol very cute and also sweet!

    ~God Bless~

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