A boy’s infatuation with a Sweet Girl.

Meek gutless lightweight
Horde of a million white carbon copies
Walking the aisle of unending a eons
Soulless glissade en-route to repulsion

Fortuitous tempered gaze
From a close afar
Strangling attraction of unseen perplexity
Magnetizing his dead senses

Cabalistic ensnare of honeyed ardor
Arcane grotto housing romantic souls
The harmonization of passionate lip locks
Fluttering sprites loving and loving

The lunatic explosion fleetly crumbled
Without questions, without answers
Her amaranthine loveliness drifted away
Imploding a spell of indefinite hurt

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  • rory cuts on Nov 14, 2007

    intensely overwhelming. great work!

  • W.J on Nov 16, 2007

    Not bad! Good piece of work danny!

  • nicole on Nov 27, 2007

    wonderful!!!

  • atomdivider on Jan 29, 2009

    very soulful yet morbid ! great depths!!!!
    i like it!

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