A lonely hamster gets his girl!

 

 

My goodness me I am bored,

I want to get out of my cage and explore.

 

I like to play on my wheel,

until I get my foot caught then I squeal.

 

Doing back flips of my platform is fun fun for a while.

 

I move my bedding now and then into neat piles,

I run round my cage for what seems like miles.

 

My goodness me I am bored,

I want to get out my cage and explore.

 

My owner is coming over,

I like to sit on her shoulder.

 

She likes to take me out,

oh goody I want to shout.

 

What is that?

 

It’s another me oh let me see.

 

Oh she smells nice for a hamster that is,

I better look the biz.

 

Now me is we.

 

We will play on the wheel

I will mind my foot I don’t want to squeal.

 

We will do back back flips for a while,

then we will walk round our cage it wont seem like miles.

 

We will share my bed,

so many not so boring things going on in my head.

 

Enough said!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Comments (17)
  • Teves on Nov 11, 2009

    I love this poem…

  • Themax on Nov 11, 2009

    “Enough said!!” ha ha! that’s funny cardy !!
    nice and beautiful poem,Thank you :)

  • Aleena on Nov 11, 2009

    lol love it!

  • Papa Sparks on Nov 11, 2009

    This was precious and a fun read

  • Hansika on Nov 11, 2009

    very nice and fun too…thanks for the share…

  • razumtina on Nov 11, 2009

    GREAT!

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 12, 2009

    Loved it…

  • Adam Qualmann on Nov 12, 2009

    very cute. Enough said!! LOL

  • Mr Ghaz on Nov 12, 2009

    nice one..i liked this poem..so lovely Thanks :)

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 12, 2009

    That is such a cute piece. Well done.

    Christine

  • Lord Banks on Nov 12, 2009

    Nice one

  • lillyrose on Nov 12, 2009

    Oh my! that was so sweet and cute!

  • giftarist on Nov 12, 2009

    Great, like this a lot!

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 12, 2009

    Cute poem! An enjoyable read!

  • Goodselfme on Nov 12, 2009

    Very cute Hamster poem

  • chantell on Nov 12, 2009

    :( Standing Ovation :)

  • Aiyanna on Nov 14, 2009

    :) Simple and well said… Very Enjoyable !!!

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