Sweet Impact

ashan1614 on Nov 3, 2009

Some things cannot be avoided; hopefully that turns out to be a GOOD thing.

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The melding of mind, body and soul

Like nothing created before or since

Our union crafted to perfection

We were molded in the heavens

At the beginning of time

Celestial bodies set on a collision course

Despite the vastness of the universe

The reaches of time and space

We could not have avoided

This sweet impact

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paperchaser on Nov 3, 2009
keep writting
ken bultman on Nov 3, 2009
Wow! How nice was that?
K.Reshma on Nov 3, 2009
Very sweet
Darla Cooke on Nov 3, 2009
Lovely poem!
diamondpoet on Nov 3, 2009
Lovely work, I felt the passion.
T.Rex McGoogle on Nov 3, 2009
Powerfully good. That’s one of my favorite things you’ve done.
You engineered a quite good structure of passionate lines.
cutedrishti8 on Nov 3, 2009
A wonderful poem..
Themax on Nov 3, 2009
so sweet keep on sharing
deep blue on Nov 4, 2009
Must be romantic. Very well crafted lines.
inuni on Nov 4, 2009
good one.
Aldrin A Wilding West on Nov 18, 2009
You, thoughts of love, and thoughts of space and the heavens. It doesn’t get any better than this….

Beautiful piece…x
dgraphicrookie on Nov 19, 2009
Lovely. The sweet impact that led us to where we are now.
Jay Knights on Mar 30, 2010
Another wonderful poem. The thoughts it provokes are so incredibly deep, a love made completely of fate. Absolutely lovely.

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