As a poet, in letter and spirit and even literally in reality, I am made to realize that in this materialistic lusty world, all the higher instincts have gone to dust. In my practical life, I have also been enlightened by a Cutie and Sweetie to be Down-to-earth. Obviously,that has inspired me to this poem "SWEET SIX “TEEN” COMMANDMENTS".Please go through keeping your bouquets and brickbats ready to throw at me!

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I paid a courtesy call on God!

And asked him to season the times as Spring,

For you could ever be an springing offspring;

 
                                                                      

I implored the Mother Nature!

To rejuvenate the Earth with fauna and flora,

For you to stroll being a flawless angelic aura;

I sought the Goddess of Venus!

To sculpt your contours in gold to be a grove,

For you to enshrine luminescent platonic Love!

I prayed the sky lying Full moon! 

To adorn your plait and gait with stars in teen,

With the fragrance of jasmine and night queen; 

I adored the dawning Sun God!

To be the Vermilion on your flawless forehead,

And be the horizon of your eyebrows to stead;     

I’ve worshipped the *TRINITY! of Godesses  

To create you *exquisite, preserve your *radiance 

And destroy all the evils to mould you *matchless!

Ultimately, you have incarnated

As the embodied and personified divine beauty!  

I felt you are the boon of my penance!

When I admirably recited and dedicated

My 1st Romantic Poem to you and looked at you,

You simply heckled,That’s all you can do?’

I was aghast with lips and heart dried up,

But you said again, “Hey man! What Nonsense!

Could your poems wipe my sweat like napkins?”

“Can your Divine Nectar of Poetry intoxicate me?

Can the verses get at least American gems for me? 

Can your tunes attune to satiate my baser instincts?”

“Can you afford to reserve a seat for us in pub?

Can you rush me in deluxe-car into a nightclub?

Can your nuances share girls in a group sex hub?”

“Well! Could you charter a flight for our honeymoon?

Could you drive me crazy as my bed-mate to groan?”

Then why all the feminine figurative, only to swoon?”

“Either dwell and perish in an unmanly Fools Paradise!

Or please be down-to-earth to taste mortal pleasures!

No body knows the myth of those heavenly treasures!”

“I don’t mean to tamper with your ego or man’s pride,

I’m not to meddle with the inspirations of your heart,  

I’m only pampering you to chase away your illusions!”

You cannot get on and go on unpractical and acute!   

Please realise yourself at least now, it is not too late!

As I’m a SWEET SIXTEEN for all and for you too to date!”

About the ancient saints and sages I have no notion,

But She has lead me to an insight of my infatuation

In vain; for I still remain as the addict of inspiration!

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  • VARAPRASAD NVLN on Sep 12, 2011

    TO EARN NAME AND FAME IS EASIER THAN KEEPING IT UP AND PRESERVING FOR EVER. AS I AM RENOWNED POET AND WRITER IN ENGLISH, TELUGU AND HINDI, MY LEARNED FRIENDS AND READERS EXPECT ME TO ALWAYS PEN EXCEPTIONAL POEMS AND ARTICLES, WHICH IS A HIMALAYAN TASK. TO LIVE UP TO THEIR EXPECTATIONS IS LIKE WALKING THE KNIFE EDGE.

    THIIS ORIGINAL POEM “SWEET SIX ‘TEEN’ COMMANDMENTS” IS ONE OF LIFE TIME POEMS. THERE IS AN UNDERLYING SATIRE ALSO..EVERY IMAGE I INSERTED HEREIN IS QUITE MEANINGFUL AND RELEVANT TO THE CONTEXT AND TEXT OF THE POEM. I ASK THE READERS TO BE READY WITH THEIR BOUQUETS AND BRICKBATS TO THROW ON ME, WHICH WOULD IN TURN HELP ME IN THE PROCESS OF REFINEMENT.

    I THANK THE EDITORIAL BOARD OF “www.triond.com FOR THEIR CONTINUED CORDIALITY, MOTIVATION AND ENCOURAGEMENT BEING GIVEN TO ME.

    VARAPRASAD NVLN ‘BHUVANOJJWALA’
    POET AND WRITER
    email:zemini77@gmail.com
    mob: +91 7893291129

  • Socorro Lawas on Sep 16, 2011

    Your title has been cleverly conceived. Beautiful photos.

  • VARAPRASAD NVLN on Sep 17, 2011

    I don’t know how to thank you Ms. Socorro Lawas! You are really a great lady. My Godness! You have been devoting and dedicating your entire life for teaching and writing. Hats off! As a renowned poet and writer in English, Hindi and Telugu, I treat your compliments as blessings.

    With reverential regards,
    Yours ever,

    VARAPRASAD NVLN ‘BHUVANOJJWALA’, email:zemini77@gmail.com: mob:+ 91 7893291129

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